What is it in You?
What is it in you...
That I’m unable to look away...
What spell is this
That’s so hard fray...
How is it that...
The look in your eyes
Is able to whisper in my ears...
Each word off your lips
Is able to hang in the air...
How is it that...
Even an inflexion of a muscle
Holds my attention till eternity...
Your very person
Defines my femininity...
How can just one smile...
A fleeting one at that...
Make me feel like a winner...
How can just one frown,
A shy shrug of shoulders...
Make me feel like a sinner...
How can just one touch
Of a finger on my ankle,
Make me melt like ice...
How can just one kiss
Gentle, on my wrist...
Make me close my eyes...
How can my own name
Whispered from your mouth...
Make me feel alive...
How can sheer ecstasy,
Of having you to love...
Make me want to cry...
What is it in you…
That I’m unable to look away
What spell is this
That’s impossible to fray.
posted by Spirit @ 2:20 PM
9 comments
9 Comments:
Hi dear,
Sometimes some pieces of written expression and emotion are so very intense that one becomes totally speechless. Whatsoever one thinks to write about it, it seems very minisucle and worthless in front of such an insurmountable expression.
I am in that state now. I am still clueless to believe that "I" am getting such a love, such an expression of the same. "I", still to my bewilderment, is the luckiest; the odds being the entire race of living beings against me.
Now the verses sound,
What is it in me, that I have you? and I can't seem to find an answer.
Please forgive all my faults blindly .
I am really lucky and ecstasic to have you. Take care dear.
-He
Speechless ! i am spechless. seriously my feelings are same as Anuj.
hmmmm... i hav thought a lot but i wont add anything... dont want to commit a sin-;)
just want to say that i am very happy after reading the blog and the comment by HE....
SHE .. u r goddess of love !
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"What is it in you...
That I’m unable to look away..."
felt that way sum years back!!! but i still cud associate it.
"The look in your eyes
Is able to whisper in my ears..."
well thts a line i love...says it all.
u know i feel d same wid a fren, n i really get words in my ears not by just looks but by her thoughts..so wud say a very beautiful line:)
"Even an inflexion of a muscle
Holds my attention till eternity..."
again a beautiful line.. tht tells me of d observation 1 has n d 1 i had wen i observed her ..tht too years back
"Your very person
Defines my femininity..."
no comment on dis but i feel d same..
"How can just one touch
Of a finger on my ankle,
Make me melt like ice..."
the most beautiful lines of all..yaar yeh kitni acchi hai..i remember u tellin a story on holi bout a lover who blows a rose petal coz he cant touch her... 1 touch n it says it all. i always feel tht girls hav a great sense of touch..u prooved it
"How can my own name
Whispered from your mouth...
Make me feel alive..."
i feel this too, i lived this too..speechless
"How can sheer ecstasy,
Of having you to love...
Make me want to cry..."
tht is wat i call...LOVE....
n nothin on his comment..he completes ur poem..
Kya baat hai :)
He, kuchh seekho :)
Lots to learn from you, I wish I do...
teri jhakaas poem pe meri bakwaas.
Every line of your poem is dipped in deep love, respect and the warm feelings that you have for him.Every word has made my heart melt.The description that you gave to feelings is really unmatched.The last lines of the poem remind me of "bobby" because she behaved in the same way when i did similar things to her.
This poem has strengthen my beleif that nobody in this world can love him as much as u do.
i pray to GOD that your love should find its destination.
Vikas
fourth time...
still fresh and invigourating...
no comments.. just a signature...
and God Bless
jc
i earlier said that i don't want to commit a sin by commenting on this but i can't resist from commenting for a second time.
read this one twice right now. get tempted to comment on a particular verse but then feel that the next verse is as good. in fact each word is gold, each expression is as pure as diamond ( i guess is the purest form of carbon :-D).
want to fall in love after reading this one. want to feel what you have felt. want to love.
you are amazing. you are Goddess of love...
would like to see you with HIM asap.
luv you always
PS
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